Could you clarify your ideas in more detail in the next draft?

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Please clarify your ideas in more detail in the next draft.

I'd appreciate it if you could clarify your ideas further in the next draft.

Your ideas need more detail; please clarify them in the next draft.

I'm having trouble understanding your ideas; could you clarify them in more detail in the next draft?

Please provide a more detailed explanation of your ideas in the subsequent draft.

Can you expand on your ideas a bit more in the next draft?

Make your ideas clearer in the next draft.

To make your thoughts or concepts more understandable.

With greater specificity and thoroughness.