Learn · Sentences Giving Feedback

Your analysis is solid, but you could enhance your argument by including more data.

B2

Sentence

Narrator

Your analysis is solid, but you could enhance your argument by including more data.

Study notes

How to use in different contexts

Giving Feedback

Your analysis is solid, but adding more data would strengthen your argument.

Peer Review

The analysis is well-reasoned, however, incorporating additional data could enhance its persuasiveness.

Self-Reflection

My analysis is sound, but I need to include more data to make it more convincing.

Instructional Setting

To improve your argument, consider including more supporting data.

Rephrased versions

Formal

While your analysis is robust, the inclusion of further data would augment your argument.

Casual

Your analysis is good, but it would be even better with more data.

Simpler English

Your analysis is okay, but more information would make it stronger.

Phrases to learn

enhance your argument

To improve or strengthen the reasoning and evidence presented.

including more data

Adding more facts, figures, or information to support a claim.