You’ve demonstrated great research skills, but I suggest organizing the findings more clearly.

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You've shown excellent research skills, however, I recommend organizing your findings more effectively.

Your research is impressive, but clearer organization of the findings would enhance its impact.

The research demonstrates strong skills, yet improved clarity in presenting the findings is needed.

While your research skills are evident, a more structured presentation of the findings is suggested.

Your research skills are commendable; nevertheless, a more systematic presentation of the findings is advisable.

Your research is great, but try to make the results easier to understand.

You did a good job on the research, but make the findings clearer.

Showed excellent abilities in conducting and presenting research.

Arranging and presenting research results in a more understandable way.