Your ideas are strong, but you could express them more clearly in your final draft.

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Your ideas are strong, but you could express them more clearly in the final draft.

I suggest you clarify your ideas for a stronger final draft.

The ideas are sound, however, the final draft needs clearer expression.

Your ideas are excellent; with some clarification, your final draft will be even better.

While your ideas possess merit, enhanced clarity in their presentation within the final draft is recommended.

Your ideas are good, but try to make them easier to understand in your final version.

Your ideas are great, but make them clearer in your final draft.

To communicate ideas in a more understandable way.

The final version of a written document.