Based on your feedback, I’ll be revising the proposal to better align with the objectives, and I look forward to presenting the updated version soon.

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Following your feedback, I'm revising the proposal to better meet the objectives.

Thanks for your comments; I'll revise the proposal to better align with the goals.

I'll incorporate your suggestions and present a revised proposal shortly.

I plan to revise the proposal based on your feedback and present it soon.

In response to your feedback, the proposal will be revised to ensure alignment with the objectives. The updated version will be presented shortly.

Okay, I'll tweak the proposal based on what you said and show you the new one soon.

I'll change the plan to fit the goals better, and I'll show you the new one soon.